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Love is a clenched fist Love is bitter, the dark side of the street Love is another 'con' added to the list Love is demented, it oozes deceit Love is a tresure trove of lies and conceit
Jodie Williams for Francine's One English Quintain contest 30 Aug 2011

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Date: 8/30/2011 7:52:00 PM
this has not showed up on the contest page, please re-enter if for the contest
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Jodie Williams
Date: 8/31/2011 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, have re-entered it :)
Date: 8/30/2011 6:48:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Yesss, I Suppose It Could Be Viewed This Way Although Then, Tis Wouldn't Truly Be Love Yet Perhaps *^_^* A Moment Of Lust Flowing By & Perhaps Leaving A Wake In Bitter Waters Leading Unto Who Know What Type of Repercussions??? *^_^* My Dear Precious & Priceless Lady But, So It Goes!? *^_^* Keep Poen My Dear!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Jasper *
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