Let Me, Milord

When I wake up from sleep today,
Let me die of the days gone by
To be fresh like dawn of the day,
When I wake up Milord today,
Filled full with all punch, passion’s way,
Child’s naiveté, with dawn’s dew to vie,
When I wake up from sleep today,
Of all days gone by let me die.
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My daily prayer|19.06.2021|
Form: Triolet
Poet's note: The poem was first set as a sestet as under:
When I wake up from sleep today,
Let me die of all yesterday,
So that I’m fresh like morning sun,
Filled full with vigour and passion,
Innocent besides like a child,
And like dawn’s dew all so mild!
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Bangalee Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:42 PM
nice that is
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 5:08 PM
very nice. I really like that sestet at the bottom too
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Hello Aniruddha, this poem is beautifully created. It raises the spirits. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Kannan Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 12:07 AM
A beautiful uplifting prayer... Thanks for sharing...
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:20 PM
Wonderful prayer for morning. Let me not think of bad past and be happy today. Am going to follow this. Thanks
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