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Let Me, Milord

When I wake up from sleep today, Let me die of the days gone by To be fresh like dawn of the day, When I wake up Milord today, Filled full with all punch, passion’s way, Child’s naiveté, with dawn’s dew to vie, When I wake up from sleep today, Of all days gone by let me die. _________________________________ My daily prayer|19.06.2021| Form: Triolet Poet's note: The poem was first set as a sestet as under: When I wake up from sleep today, Let me die of all yesterday, So that I’m fresh like morning sun, Filled full with vigour and passion, Innocent besides like a child, And like dawn’s dew all so mild!

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Date: 6/29/2021 10:42:00 PM
nice that is
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:08:00 PM
very nice. I really like that sestet at the bottom too
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Date: 6/24/2021 3:58:00 PM
Hello Aniruddha, this poem is beautifully created. It raises the spirits. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/24/2021 12:07:00 AM
A beautiful uplifting prayer... Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 6/23/2021 11:20:00 PM
Wonderful prayer for morning. Let me not think of bad past and be happy today. Am going to follow this. Thanks
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