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Let Me Live

let me live in each moment
                       and feel the whispering of an endless love,
                                    as it holds me silently in its warm embrace . .



                             - i am captivated -  
               simply swept away, by your amazing grace

           
             it happened once upon a time,
               in the harmony of words;
                as the playful touch of a gentle breeze -
                              touched all of me,
                                    i am free
   
                and my heart found peace in the soothing symphony,
                       of everlasting bliss-
                 yes, my world cradles around you


                                          so let me live in your heart forever,
                               and these tiny seconds that caress;
                            the whispering of an endless love
                                          __________



~ because i want to be your everything ~
* a little romantic scribble *

Authors note: Endless Love - the piano version I had playing while I wrote this, as it set a beautiful mood for me. While reading these words, it needs to be playing in the background. Only if you choose to, you don't have to.

Also, there are many poems that I have written that are my favorite.  This is one of them.

I like writing in lower case sometimes, as it is like a whisper upon the page.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/9/2024 6:15:00 AM
Cradled in "The symphony of everlasting bliss", Wonderful write Brandy, hugs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/10/2024 4:26:00 PM
Being cradled is a wonderful feeling, especially when those moments are filled with endless bliss. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/27/2018 1:06:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, brandy! IDK how I missed this one, but a fav for me as well. Endless love can only come from a blessed heart...and you've got that dear...Have a wonderful day...Charlie :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/27/2018 1:41:00 PM
Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Charles. Such a sweet thing to say about me and my poem. I hope you enjoy moments in your day. :) Brandy
Date: 7/21/2018 11:42:00 AM
I am captivated by the magical way you have with words.You have a wonderful gift and I for one am so grateful you share it with us here.Thank you Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you SYLVIA. Such a wonderful thing to say. I am happy that you enjoy reading my scribbles. You are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/21/2018 1:48:00 AM
Brandy, it does not matter whether you meant God's love or the love of a man, because both are covered by this beautiful write. One of my favs too, and I like the lack of capital letters. It seems to flow better.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Caren. I appreciate your thoughts. It is wonderful that these words can have more than one meaning. Your kind words bring a smile. :) Brandy
Date: 7/20/2018 1:51:00 PM
Brandy, what a beautiful thought to live every moment of our lives in an endless love. Your thoughts truly are a whisper on the page. This is one of my favorite poems that you have written as well. All the best my friend. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you John. I stared writing in lower case many years ago. To me, it does feel like a whisper. Writing is about sharing emotions. I enjoy letting my thoughts dance along the page. :) I appreciate your kind words and support. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/20/2018 1:02:00 PM
Yes Brandy...You mean business...A more than wonderful write my dear...powerful indeed...All the best my friend
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2018 2:07:00 PM
These words flowed easily from the heart, and then- I placed them upon the page. Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/20/2018 12:57:00 PM
Brandy, this poem can surely be viewed as romantic. But to me it wonderfully captures the moment when a person freely accepts the loyal love of God, when they are "simply swept away by" God's "amazing grace" and want to "live in" God's "heart forever." The entire poem shouts that message to me. Definitely one of my faves.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2018 1:53:00 PM
Awe, thank you Mark. Such a wonderful thing to say. You are right, as this could hold another meaning. Love is a beautiful emotion. God's Love is Unconditional. You and your kind thoughts are appreciated. It is wonderful that these words touched your heart, in the way they did. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/20/2018 11:42:00 AM
A poets heart you have. Thanks for the authors note. Listening to the piano track while reading sets a wonderful mood. You have a new fan! TAH
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Tobey. Music truly does inspire me and my mood. I have always loved this song. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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