Black Eyed Susan Poet Rhyme

Let Me Have It Then Kiss My Petunia

He cheated on you- what a surprise
You’re wife #5 in his pattern of lies
Did you think he’d be loyal ‘cause he gave you a ring?
Did you think he’d stop flirtin’ and start stayin’ in?
Did you think you were special, that you were the one?
Puh-lease, you were a way to pay off wife #1!
Stop your cryin’ and moanin’, come on, get a grip
You were a fool, now get over it
Stop wastin’ your time on this ignorant schmuck
So what if you love him, who gives a f—k?

You’re still pretty; you’re in GREAT shape
With your blue eyes, red lips, and heart- shaped face
Your blond tresses, your dresses that show off your rack  
Oh yeah, baby, you’ve got it; you’ve still got back 
Put on some lipstick and paint your toes red
Get some f--k me heels;  get outta that bed!
You’ve got style and charm and a sexy pout
You got it goin’ on; that’s what I’m talkin’ about
Don’t dwell on him, on how he did you wrong
Get out there and show him you’re still da bomb


9/18/12
For Vienna's "Let me have it then kiss my petunia" contest

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Karen Deeks October 17, 2012 at 1:16 AM You go girlie!! some advice for those whos heart is shattered and spat....love your real life speak as it brings this piece into our century...bravo...tyvm karen

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2012 at 1:59 PM This really was a GREAT job you did. actually by not making it be just about Vie, you have created something that is more universal!!

Harry Horsman September 27, 2012 at 6:48 AM wow this is so creative, had me glued to every word, a sure winner. good luck..

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2012 at 10:06 PM oh, wait THIS is new!!!! Susan, you did FANTASTIC with this . I like how you put a new spin on the topic and made it actually nice in both stanzas , not blaming her for anything because she WAS a victim of the lout. Awesome.

Joseph May September 22, 2012 at 8:47 PM nicely penned Susan...enjoyed...luv...Joseph

Jack Horne September 18, 2012 at 8:20 AM lol, love it - sure to be a big winner, Susan. Thanks very much - loved your contest : )

Russell Sivey September 18, 2012 at 8:14 AM Wow, now this is quite the write my friend! You told her, then you raised her high on the platform! You did magnificent with this poem, you nailed the contest completely Susan! I really enjoyed this fully delightful write, full of wonderment! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2012 at 7:49 AM FANTASTIC SUSAN .. CLEVERLY CRAFTED SO MANY CAN RELATE .. AWESOMELY WRITTEN SPOCED WITH EMOTION AND HUMOR LUV .. WISHING U A BIG WIN.. OH THANKXXX SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING ME ON YOUR WINNERS LIST FOR WOODEN CRADLE .. IT IS GREATLY APPRECIATED TO BE SO HONORED AMONG THIS FABULOUS GROUP .. WOW..