Let Me Go

I feel the torrent of pain racking my body’s life.
In despair, I hold my wife's hand so tight.
Tears and sobbing surround me; my family feels helpless.
Yet as the pain subsides, I smile, knowing I’m blessed. 

I look at each of them, reminiscing about our life memories.
Watching each of them create a new family with their stories.
With each telling of what we lovingly remembered from our times.
Then a warm, gentle wind blows through, ringing the chimes.

I feel a new presence of love forming before me as I am in awe.
My family senses the calming comfort of the inevitable call.
I call forth with my last breath that I love them, to let me go.
Then my wife calmed my family and told me we are ok so I let go.

Brother Jesus held me, and he quieted my heart as I cried.
The time has come for my family to grieve as I died.
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August 19, 2026 at 11:08 PM
What great imagery on what may transpire just before one dies.
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August 20, 2026 at 12:37 AM
Thank you very much for those kind words
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