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Let Me Feel Your Lines

beautiful arouse pleasure, thirst
                                         in red prowling Feline
                                      transform to glorious delight
                                      gown with plunging neckline 

                                          erotic visions steaithy
                                          cunning instinct feline
                                    flirtatious gaze escaping play
                                        engage divine guideline

By: Eve Roper 3/30/2015
Contest Name: Let Me Feel Your Lines “Ryhme”
Sponsored By: Nette Onclaud

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/14/2015 2:06:00 PM

The last line clears the essence. Oh! so nice. Good luck in the contest. Expression is on boom. 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Eve Roper
Date: 4/14/2015 4:42:00 PM

Thank you, BL Devnath, for your encouraging words and the 7. Blessings dear friend Eve

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 5:55:00 PM

Love this, I hope you do well in the contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/4/2015 7:56:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice, for the wonderful compliment. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2015 12:41:00 PM

Well penned entry for Nette's contest, Eve! That flirtatious gaze is one of the tricks on the book! Have a Happy Easter! // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 4/4/2015 7:55:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, for the wonderful compliment.Have a wonderful Easter Sunday

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/31/2015 6:08:00 PM

Reminds me of a lady I knew ages ago. Very sensual write and surely a winner too. A7 ..

Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2015 8:16:00 PM

Thank you, Robert :) Blessings and Happy Easter

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/31/2015 1:07:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2015 7:41:00 AM

Thank you , Ravi. Blessings eve

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/31/2015 12:53:00 AM

Mysteriously attractive feline. Beyond their flirtatious behavior is the literary cat names that you call them. Capturing the essence of cat's nature. Good luck and thanks. (^_^) Noel.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2015 7:41:00 AM

Thank you, Noel, Blessings eve