Let Me Feel Your Lines

beautiful arouse pleasure, thirst
                                         in red prowling Feline
                                      transform to glorious delight
                                      gown with plunging neckline 

                                          erotic visions steaithy
                                          cunning instinct feline
                                    flirtatious gaze escaping play
                                        engage divine guideline

By: Eve Roper 3/30/2015
Contest Name: Let Me Feel Your Lines “Ryhme”
Sponsored By: Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Devnath  Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 2:06 PM
The last line clears the essence. Oh! so nice. Good luck in the contest. Expression is on boom. 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Roper Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Thank you, BL Devnath, for your encouraging words and the 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
Yvonne Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 5:55 PM
Love this, I hope you do well in the contest.
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Maurice, for the wonderful compliment. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday
Callus Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Well penned entry for Nette's contest, Eve! That flirtatious gaze is one of the tricks on the book! Have a Happy Easter! // paul
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Thank you, Paul, for the wonderful compliment.Have a wonderful Easter Sunday
Lindley Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Reminds me of a lady I knew ages ago. Very sensual write and surely a winner too. A7 ..
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, Robert :) Blessings and Happy Easter
Sathasivam Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Thank you , Ravi. Blessings eve
Villarosa Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Mysteriously attractive feline. Beyond their flirtatious behavior is the literary cat names that you call them. Capturing the essence of cat's nature. Good luck and thanks. (^_^) Noel.
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Noel, Blessings eve
Nunez Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:48 PM
haha...NICE! I can feel her seductive catwalk! Blessings for the contest, dear Eve! Hugs! Kim :)
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 7:02 PM
Thank you, Kim, I wanted to write something different. Blessings dear friend
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:03 PM
ahhh, a different kind of feline. Prrrrrr. MEOW!!!
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I'm glad you liked it you did say you like cat poems. Blessings dear friend
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