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very strange how egos self inflate ~ when filling others with hot air By David Kavanagh

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/24/2021 2:45:00 AM

That is very funny. Beware of Zeppelins ...

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/24/2021 4:12:00 AM

Thanks Kai, human Zeppelins, hover all round, a little spark normally gets rid of them, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/21/2021 4:08:00 PM

The Helium effect Astutely brilliant as always my esteemed friend

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/21/2021 9:48:00 PM

Could well be Christopher but whatever it is, it’s full of self importance, from bloating others with useless crap, cheers David

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/21/2021 7:11:00 AM

Einstein said, "more the knowledge lesser the ego. lesser the knowledge more the ego" Great monoku, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/21/2021 7:27:00 AM

Well I certainly won’t argue with Einstein Daniel, the guy practically explained how the universe works, that’s a brilliant quote, thank you for reading and commenting, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/21/2021 4:27:00 AM

Excellent thought-provoking poem; it's remarkable how this Monoku can contain so many thoughts. The world does not revolve around self-centered individuals, and their egotism causes them to suffer. They think they are better than others. And If someone think his's better than everyone else, he's arrogant, and his worth has been inflated. Best wishes.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/21/2021 7:22:00 AM

It’s a terrible fallacy to think oneself better than others, but even more so when trying to patronise them at the same time, I suppose it’s a form or narcissism, cheers David