Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

Let Me Be

You can be those slanted slopes of quandary,
                                       asymmetrical lines on my grid 
                            the definition of doubtful,
                                               the night
                    
                                            and my valley 
                     
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                                   Let me be everything else:
                  
                                 
                                            Your certainty
                                               Your truth
                                             Your security
                                               Your light
                                            Your mountain
                                               

                              
                                                “Yours”




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~ Just a little Scribble ~

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Running Wolves January 11, 2020 at 4:37 PM you are exquisite at writing... Brandy Nicole January 11, 2020 at 6:47 PM So kind of you to say. Thank you Running Wolves. :) Brandy

Edward Orozco July 12, 2019 at 2:51 PM Nicely put! I wish I could have someone to call mines. Brandy Nicole July 12, 2019 at 2:59 PM Thank you Edward. Leave your heart open, you never know when the right one might come along. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Robert Lindley April 15, 2019 at 8:05 AM Beauty resides in your superb poetry.. Afav... Brandy Nicole April 15, 2019 at 4:13 PM Thank you Robert. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. Thank you for favoring this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

Pashang Salehi March 24, 2019 at 1:18 AM So beautiful...nicely done. Brandy Nicole March 24, 2019 at 2:25 PM Thank you Pashang Salehi. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden March 5, 2019 at 6:47 AM So much wonderful intent here, and only the realization of a very deep trust ... and that is so often the issue, the conundrum, the "walls" that divide hope from reality and passion from loneliness. Beautiful write, Brandy - I thoroughly enjoyed this diversion into your mind and heart! I have to "drop by" once-in-a-while to be refreshed and renewed by your pen. Many thanks for that, and blessings, joyous for your soul. :-) <3 Brandy Nicole March 5, 2019 at 11:00 AM Thank you Greg. So kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. To be someone's hope, light and moments of trust. The reality of that, certainly is overwhelming indeed. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael February 24, 2019 at 6:43 AM Wonderful...Real too...the heart of a woman in love... Brandy Nicole February 24, 2019 at 8:30 AM Love is a Powerful emotion!! The heart accepts its intensity. Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit February 23, 2019 at 7:16 AM This is brilliant..you are gifted Brandy. The two stanzas present such wonderful contrast...let me be everything else..such music to a loved one, especially when it is a bundle of goodness. Brandy Nicole February 23, 2019 at 2:34 PM Me? Talented, skillful.? Just a poetess allowing ink to flow from colors of this pen. Thank you Vijay!! I respect you and your insight. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf February 23, 2019 at 7:15 AM Many emotions shared in this poem, Brandy, another beautiful little scribble. All my best to you. John Brandy Nicole February 23, 2019 at 2:18 PM This is sentimental, while holding truth Depth in its meaning. Thank you John. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Joseph May February 23, 2019 at 6:32 AM So beautifully and lovingly expressed Brandy.. Brandy Nicole February 23, 2019 at 1:55 PM Thank you Joseph! Such tenderness in your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp February 23, 2019 at 1:56 AM Very charming, in your own inimitable way. Also very delicate. Another nice one, Brandy. Brandy Nicole February 23, 2019 at 1:32 PM Unique and appealing. Perhaps!! Expressions from the heart of me. Simply touch this page. Thank you Lawrence. Always appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

CayCay Godwin February 22, 2019 at 9:47 PM This has quick yet penetrating flashes of adamant romantic love spillings, and needs. I sat with your poem awhile because I wanted to spend time on its lines - they caught something in me as yet undefined. Perhaps a fascination in the style? I dunno know, but I did like it ever, ever so! All the best ... CayCay Brandy Nicole February 22, 2019 at 10:55 PM Yes, the context is powerful!! Unwavering!! These words descend upon the page, in a definite way. I am in awe with your observation. Thank you CayCay. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger February 22, 2019 at 9:26 PM "let me be everything else" - there is nothing left to add now. Brandy Nicole February 22, 2019 at 10:30 PM Precisely!! Thank you Caren. My best to you my dear friend. ~ Brandy