Let Me

escape 
my egg shell world
discover a strand of approval and approve of what I, myself, do find
let me reach 
up
to new heights


before my journey can begin I find your doubt   break   my stairway
and 
my one diminutive desire 
blocked
by your contempt.

childhooddepressionhopelifecarpe diem

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Beata Agustin

June 26, 2025 at 2:27 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.