Let It Sparkle

moonlight evening 
glow with shaft of felt 
very beautiful 

amazing

my eyes go look farther 
on effulgence stars
glimmering full of jokes 

letting my thought
fly far away 
staring at a love 

a love
with a fabulous glint 
but felt lack of effulgence 

can i see 
the effulgence on your love 

may I request for the effulgence 
to exists

nonetheless toward me 
stay glisten

let it sparkle

let it sparkle

~ sukmawati komala ~ 
26 february 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 27, 2013 at 12:49 PM
a very nice and lovely verse... Sukmawait, love the passion..xox~PD
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February 27, 2013 at 10:52 AM
such creative poetry, amazing and wonderful to read...
Moore Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 12:44 AM
This is so beautiful and romantic. Always a great write...Soup mail...xx Holly Moore
Harrell Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 9:04 PM
You have the heart of a poet. So beautiful. Great one, Sukmawati!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 5:20 PM
I love the sparkle of THIS, sweetie. You always write beautifully.
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 1:01 PM
- Nature's beautiful pictures, no matter the season, we find beauty. - A gem, a beautiful gem Sukmawati !!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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February 26, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Sukmamwati just beautiful...David
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