Let It Be

What tears me inside is 
Not  knowing the truth
Not knowing  why

Im alone or why he's with her
Why he's smiling back at me
Why he won't just let it be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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April 9, 2009 at 4:09 PM
this is wat i call awesomeness i wonder who this is 2 lol but this is pure prettyness!!!!!!!!!!
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December 11, 2008 at 7:26 PM
Nice poem and thanks for the comments. On line 2 and 3 did you mean no in or Knowing, consider revising, It will help your poem.
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