Bette Bavington Poet Villanelle

Let Her Out

Fairy captured in a jar
All she wants is out.
Keeping her isn't going to make you popular
Or add to your repertoire.
I would say she lives here about.
Fairy captured in a jar
Yes, she has magic but she isn't bizarre.
Do you think your some one with clout?
Keeping her isn't going to make you popular
Or fabular.
Be smart. Let the magical creature go to 
Gadabout.
Fairy captured in a jar
You go to far.
Look out
Keeping her isn't going to make you popular
It will only mar
Your reputation with out a doubt.
Fairy captured in a jar
Keeping her isn't going to make you popular.

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM - This is perfect for the contest: Picture This - Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Joseph May - Be quick ... Bette ....only one poem is missing before the contest closes !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... YES, the contests are free!!!! Bette Bavington March 30, 2018 at 7:38 PM Some one will have to explain how to do this. I didn't find a Joseph May. I do not know how to Submit. Bette Bavington March 30, 2018 at 7:33 PM I don't know how to do this.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 29, 2018 at 2:39 PM This is such a clever poem, I like the repetition. Is this for contest? Good luck if so :) Bette Bavington March 30, 2018 at 2:24 PM That is awesome. Thank you so much for clearing that up. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 29, 2018 at 3:49 PM The contests are free! You can enter, you just need a membership to sponsor a contest. Bette Bavington March 29, 2018 at 3:33 PM Thank you. No. I was under the impression I could not enter contests because I haven't paid a fee yet. Thank you for thinking it was good enough to enter one.