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Let Er Rip

As she opened the letter She thought she'd feel better. But this wasn't to be. The letter was from John. Whom she had loved long And now he was setting her free. Cowardly John. Who she depended upon, Now had decided to flee To love evermore A life together to explore Was what John had promised to me. What a despicable man And fool that I am To be attracted to a thug That crawled from the ground. And a target he found I should stamp on this creep like a bug. A bug no John's worse. I feel a need to curse But revenge will not ease my pain. I'll rip up John's letter. And trust I'll feel better. Imagining what could have been confetti is rain 24 June 2021 contest Let Er Rip Sponsor John Lawless

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Date: 6/24/2021 9:54:00 AM
Shirley, you jest?
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/24/2021 5:36:00 PM
G'Day Rico, Revenge wont make him return her love. She needs to be able to trust before she can love again. The rain will help to wash him out of her life and down the drain where he belongs.
Date: 6/24/2021 4:39:00 AM
Wonderful write. Is it for contest? If yes you need to put date, contest and sponsors name. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/24/2021 5:51:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind and encouraging comments. The write was for the contest Rama, I was pleased that you noticed that I had admitted to put the full details. Kind Regards to you and yours, Shirley

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