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Lessons From The Hobbit

Life Lesson from a Best Seller In appreciation of the nature trails of New Zealand, It was not the journey, but friendships that formed as a band, The time and memories strengthened, and kept challenges at bay, Best friends to the end learnt wisdom in treks of clay, Hardships built strong characters, with life where they roamed, From where they were comfortable in their larders at home, From where they were comfortable they travelled, Stories inside the story became clear and unravelled, The dangers could be lesser, through Poetry and Song, When hiking in good company the road is never long, The twists and turns in life itself with the unfamiliar turf, Help us grow and propel us forward, for all it’s worth, When travelling with a pack there is nothing to lack, Good company will always see you through, Supported by each others strengths’, in all you do!

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Date: 2/22/2018 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, well written and I totally agree with the sentiments within your poem. :))
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:22:00 AM
Elegant well written , Susan, I didn't read the books , but did see the movies...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 2/20/2018 6:21:00 PM
Friendships, congratulations on ur win here Susan
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Susan Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, I am thrilled you all like my poem, yes friendships along the journey of life, that's what makes every step count.
Date: 2/20/2018 5:14:00 PM
Lessons about friendship well learned. Congrats on your win in my contest, Susan.
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Susan Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2018 7:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, I am thrilled for the win and for the lovely comments. Thank you!
Date: 2/9/2018 5:26:00 PM
J.R.R Tolkien was a great story teller. Yes, Bilbo Baggins was someone special.
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