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Less Said

         twilight reflects
         be sad be sad
         day is ending
         again and again
         you yes you
         have failed to fly
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September 27, 2025 at 9:04 AM
The artistic and emotive power of your artwork is truly captivating. Less is both heartbreaking and intriguing.... great contest entry
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September 26, 2025 at 4:49 PM
less here is poignant and captivating....outstanding contest entry, hugs, Sara
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