Less Said

buds upon the maple
silenced in ice
at what cost
spring begins 
melting tears
bring life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Swan Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Congrats. Leaf buds are wonderful promises, and in your part of the world the ice makes for silence. Lovely contemplation on the glory of the seasons beginning. J :)
Steele Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Jeanette. Appreciate your support.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Your entry was succinctly edifying/ Blessings, and Aloha.
Steele Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Hilo. Much appreciated.
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