Less Said

ummm ok…
what’s that you say?
ummm no way…
nope, not today.
ummm good day…
just go away!


Less Said Poetry Contest
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9/24/2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delegans Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 4:36 PM
Inner monologue came to mind right away. Nicely done, Danny.
Derden Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 4:47 PM
Thank you.
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 7:47 AM
I picked up indifference until the last line, it said 'annoyed.' Reminded me of one time when I just wanted to read on a plane. Effective brevity.
Derden Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 4:48 PM
Yeah, you try to be nice about it but eventually...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 5:06 PM
creative contest entry. well done
Derden Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Thank you.
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