Lens

a long neck and curling breast
quickly passed through my wide lens
closer closer I did get
and then my sun did set
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 24, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Ralph, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
Tsiluma Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Ha! Just lovely! Love the symbolism in effect. Nice!
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September 23, 2012 at 11:55 PM
Hi was it a swan? they can be vicious one of them would set any sun if it turned , Nice litter write here and thank you for reading one of my old poems, it could do with a revamp, I have learned form my older ones . bless you i will read more of yours
Comporozos Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Clever again and evocative
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September 19, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Interesting work..I wonder what happened..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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