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Lens

a long neck and curling breast quickly passed through my wide lens closer closer I did get and then my sun did set

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/24/2014 10:51:00 AM
Ralph, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 9/24/2012 6:38:00 AM
Ha! Just lovely! Love the symbolism in effect. Nice!
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Date: 9/23/2012 11:55:00 PM
Hi was it a swan? they can be vicious one of them would set any sun if it turned , Nice litter write here and thank you for reading one of my old poems, it could do with a revamp, I have learned form my older ones . bless you i will read more of yours
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Date: 9/21/2012 2:19:00 PM
Clever again and evocative
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:06:00 PM
Interesting work..I wonder what happened..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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