Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

Lend An Ear

Blank stares and yawns
They’re so blasé
In their own private world
Nobody listens today
They don’t even pretend
It's all black or white nothing's grey
iPads and cellphones
What could she possibly have to say
She’s just part of the furniture
Old discarded and passé



AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2021

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Gershon Wolf December 24, 2018 at 9:36 PM Ooooh! Way to plunge the dagger in deep---exactly where it belongs. Keep it there too, until and unless the current generation mends its rude ways. Well-struck, Line! Holiday Happiness! ~ Gershon Line Gauthier December 24, 2018 at 11:32 PM Thank you so much, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment. I hear you.

Susan Ashley December 24, 2018 at 4:12 PM Your striking poem richly expresses the sad truth of old age and loneliness so eloquently, Line. A thought provoking and meaningful piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Line Gauthier December 24, 2018 at 11:33 PM Thank you so much, Susan, for your lovely visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong December 23, 2018 at 7:23 PM I feel it is so rude, especially when you are out at a restaurant and you ignore your companion to chat on the phone. The cell needs to come with etiquette lessons! I liked your poem a lot Line. Happy Holidays! : ) xxoo Line Gauthier December 23, 2018 at 7:29 PM I so agree. Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Connie.

Caren Krutsinger December 23, 2018 at 7:11 PM We have parents whom teachers need to talk to, who walk in and out of the building like this, motioning to their phones, shaking their heads 'no', who do not want to hear about their children. It is such an inane way to spend time. Line Gauthier December 23, 2018 at 7:24 PM Pretty bad when priorities should clearly be people... especially CHILDREN !! Oops I shouted.

Kim Rodrigues December 23, 2018 at 4:37 PM Oh, Line, yes this is so true and so sad. I was walking close to coworker going in same direction and that stupid phone was glued to her ear. Let’s not chat! Line Gauthier December 23, 2018 at 7:03 PM I wonder if the pendulum will ever swing back to the days when people liked to talk to each other. Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim.