Lemons

citrus spray fills the air

nails dig in thin yellow skin

lips pucker body shivers


                                            P.R.Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sambourne Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 1:02 PM
You've penned another winning haiku. A fine, fine read. Be well. Brian
Adebayo Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Exhilarating!
Deremer Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Thank you.
Haight Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Very nice Haiku! Great lemon imagery that really made me feel its presence! Sandra
Deremer Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 4:36 PM
The scent of citrus in the air is divine..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Deremer Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Thank you.
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