Lemonade Makes a Lemon

When lemonade makes a lemon you hand life! Entrant into David Williams' "Chiasmus" contest 3/7/2012

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/8/2012 2:35:00 AM

well for sure Russell.. those lemonade people can upset the flow of life luv.. a good Chiasmus for David.. good luck.. so happy u enjoyed my effort at creating one too..tricky form..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2012 7:09:00 PM

lol...in that case... in my hands I have apples...lol.. what do you make of that.. he he he... Nice entry.. good luck in David's contest..pd

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/7/2012 7:05:00 PM

incomprihensable why this is a form

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/7/2012 6:32:00 PM

I like this to a lot !! Nice work my friend. Michael

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/7/2012 6:30:00 PM

The Norman Vincent Peale approach to the contest....likey like!! Gwendolen