Lemon and Lime

buttercup meadow
beside the pond where frogs croak
fireflies when sun dies

flowergreennaturesunyellowhaiku

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Sam Kauffman

April 2, 2020 at 4:54 PM

So well crafted, Evelyn. I'm with Gershon on the double entendre in the last line. Classic! Thanks for the beautiful picture on this spring day.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 2, 2020 at 6:33 PM

You are so welcome, Sam. Thanks for the happy thoughts. :=)

Gershon Wolf

April 2, 2020 at 12:46 PM

The last line's double entendre is a classic: Fire flies when sun dies too! FAVE time. Thanks, Evelyn! :) Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 2, 2020 at 6:31 PM

You're welcome, and thank you for the marvelous uplift, Gershon. So pleased to be in your FAVEs. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 2, 2020 at 9:57 AM

Hello Evelyn Judy Buehler, I see this scene as I read this poem. Stay safe- be well- Stay strong. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 3, 2020 at 7:23 PM

Hello Evelyn, I wish the same for you. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 2, 2020 at 12:38 PM

Hello Darlene. Thank you for your warm thoughts and well wishes. You be safe and stay strong, too. Blessings.

Judy Ball

April 2, 2020 at 9:19 AM

What a lovely picture you draw with these words. I love walking through meadows and watching the butterflies and fireflies and all the creatures that go un- noticed by most people./ Great job here. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 2, 2020 at 12:35 PM

My love of nature goes back to childhood, when I'd gather flowers for bouquets for my mother. Thank you for your thoughtful and delightful words. Blessings.