Legionnaire

Just a quick notification that
A new resident was on his way
Giving  us enough time to get 
A room ready for him to stay
Not our usual type of client
A Veteran French Legionnaire
It was beyond my pay grade 
To know how he’d ended there.

He was going through a crisis
In his domestic civilian life
Needed a break away from
His family and his wife.
The Veteran Brotherhood 
Had taken care of it 
Referred him on to us 
For one of our bedsits.

He’d woken up in hospital 
Physically sound and whole
The only surviving member 
Of an ambushed recce patrol
With no recollection of how 
He’d ended up there,
Or the three days lost that
He’d spent under care.

Discharged back to Blighty
Survivor guilt to the fore
PTSD setting in he just 
Couldn’t  take anymore.
All this had happened 
A good few years ago
But Traumatic Stress Disorder
Can take many years to show.

He stayed just a few months
And, not telling us why
He went back to his wife 
Where he'd chosen to die.
Just days before he passed 
I was surprised to hear his voice 
When he rang me to tell me
Why he made that choice.

Said with Chronic lung disease 
He was very near his end
And he wanted to thank me
For being both helper and friend.  
Shocked and distraught not
Knowing what to say or do
I let Forces  black humour
Help carry us through.

The Brotherhood is International
A mixed and disparate lot
So many times it’s the sad case 
Each other is all we’ve got.
Booted and suited by his box
We all took time to think 
Drank a toast to his memory, left
Untouched the absent friend’s drink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/18/2022 11:33:00 AM
A horrible situation "He’d woken up in hospital Physically sound and whole The only surviving member Of an ambushed recce patrol" that you explained in perfect end rhymes!
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Date: 11/17/2022 1:59:00 PM
a very touching tribute, terry! you've described this sad story so well, up to and including the untouched drink at the end...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 11/17/2022 4:47:00 PM
Thanks ilene - he was a huge character and it’s taken me until now to be able to tell part his story. Died too young, Terry.
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