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Legend

of

Ogopogo

Legend of Ogopogo

Chilled by cold Canadian air
Lake Okanagan’s waters run deep
And so does its Ogopogo
A legend the centuries keep

Native Americans feared it
Animal sacrifices were made
Before they boarded their canoes
And set out to traverse the lake

Campfire stories natives told
Of the monster “Snake in the Lake”
Long before Europeans arrived
To find odd figures in boats’ wakes

On the same latitude as Loch Ness
Ogopogo is thought to dwell
Beneath the cliffs of Squally Point
In an underwater cave’s well

Indian legends oft’ based on fact
And more than lore is in this mix
Thirty cars filled with tourists
Stared in awe, 1926

From fifteen to forty feet long
Lean body with a serpent’s head
Noted scientists suggest it is
A primitive whale once thought dead

Curious folks throughout the world
Are drawn to the creature’s lake
With two hundred sightings to date
Do you think what they’re seeing is fake?





February 24, 2020
For Chantelle's "Your Favorite Legend" contest
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Callus Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Ogopogo is a new word to me, Carolyn, but your descriptive poem soon served to enlighten me. Had Cherl Dunn still been alive she would have enjoyed reading this poem, a subject close to her heart. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Like Cherl, I am a fan of history and folklore. The Ogopogo seems to be real as so many people have seen it and even taken photos.
Maverick Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 3:58 PM
I can't write it off Carolyn, but I'm Getting on a bit now my intellect dimmed By cumulative events I've witnessed, a description known as experience, and that is Nowhere valued as much as theories! I will Add that should such an animal exist today it Would cause havoc in evelotion theories The same as oak beams in Tudor buildings are Part petrified after only 800 yrs not millions Claimed for wood to stone and many have not Been submerged in water, just oxygen elements A write Enjoyed by I.'
Walker Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 8:13 PM
Carolyn, a fascinating tale. Thank you for introducing some of us to the "Legend of Ogopogo." ~ Sonia
Sergi Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Hi Carolyn: There are many legends and some never die. All legends emit a sign.
Sergi Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Hi Carolyn: There are many legends and some never die. All legends emit a sign.
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Well penned, Carolyn. Very interesting.
Shaw Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 9:25 PM
I believe they did exist, but; they were of a dying breed, so not sure if we would find one as in today, lovely poem; enjoyed . . . : )
Proxenos Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:46 PM
I so enjoyed this poem Carolyn, I did not know of this Canadian Serpent like creatrue between 15 to 40 feet long, a very iinformative well penned poem dear friend and amazing that it is on the same latitude as Loch Ness! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Shaw Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 9:28 PM
It's the same one, just on vacation . . . : )
Horsman Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 10:42 PM
The beauty and the creativeness of your poetry, has as always been superb, and this just adds to all you write. love it,
Macfarlane Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Great informative write Carolyn. Happy to know more about this legend. Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 12:39 PM
I remember reading about this creature that is a lot like descriptions of Scotland's Nessie. You expressed this legend brilliantly Carolyn. I hope it is a top winner for you. xxoo
Devonshire Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Some believe the creature is related to Nessie. Thanks for reading, Connie!
Leffanta Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:26 AM
WELL done! Looks like a winner to me! Aloha! Rico
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:55 AM
- We have such a legend in Norway too, Carolyn :) - According to popular belief, Seljordsormen is a sea or linen worm, that is, a large, snake-like sea creature, which resides in the 13 km-long Seljords water in Seljord municipality in Telemark / Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Thank you for the link, Sunshine! I just looked it up and it does appear your "sea worm" could be related to Nessie. Really enjoyed the articles on this!!
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:56 AM
https://www.google.com/search?q=sj%C3%B8ormen+i+seljord&oq=sj%C3%B8ormen+i&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l7.16293j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:01 AM
I hadn't heard of this one Carolyn, must Google it for more, love this stuff. They often say some creatures from the dinasaur age have survived. Good luck. Tom
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Indeed, there are some throwbacks to the dinosaur eras that appear from time to time. And we still don't know what creatures inhabit the Mariana Trench, the deepest part of the Pacific Ocean. Thanks for reading!
Laurie Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Hello Carolyn … interesting tale indeed. Very hard to prove one way or the other. We have Bunyips and Drop Bears here to keep people interested in folklore. The extinct Tasmanian Tiger is still searched for, and there have been fuzzy photos claiming to be the tiger - thank you Caroline - Lindsay
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Yes, I did some research a few years ago on the Tasmanian Tiger. It may very well still be alive. I'd love to know more about your Bunyips and Drop Bears!
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 8:09 PM
This is so cool. Never even knew of it before
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Great legend, Carolyn, and what a name, Ogopogo! Did you notice that Ogopogo is the same backwards as forwards?! :) ~ YoBoy
Warrior Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Some scientists believe these creatures live deep within the Oceans...and once in a while, they pop their heads...who knows what's down there?...lovely description Carolyn...all the best from the Wingster & best of luck...but see a winner :o)
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:24 AM
There was some fuss a few decades ago when Japanese fishermen claim to have caught a Plasiosaur that was a species that survived the end of the dinosaur reign. I would like to see what creatures inhabit the Mariana Trench in the Pacific. Said to be the deepest ocean.
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 4:52 PM
When we were in Germany on a tour, the guide told us much about Loch Ness. Though I didn't know anything about Ogopogo, you have so richly explained in splendid details this legend. Regardless of what one believes, it is always a joy to relish the stories. Excellent poem Carolyn--you certainly made it believable. All the best.
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:21 AM
Thanks for reading, Vijay!
Green Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Really nicely done Carolyn. I am familiar with this legendary creature. You have now brought it to life for me.
Devonshire Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 4:05 PM
It's amazing how many people claim to have seen it. Thanks for reading, Chris! (I have been compiling a book of poems about legends.)
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