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Legacy

He was my neighbor.
He lived up the street.

Sometimes he said “Hi”.

One day I saw him 
At the corner store.

We walked home 
Together.

I said I was upset 
With my hair.

I didn’t like it.

He said he liked my hair.
He said it was soft and shiny.

He said it reminded him of
A baby seal he had seen

At the zoo.

He said mine was darker brown,
Almost black,

And longer.

He thought my hair was
Beautiful.

Later that week he died. 
It was a drowning accident.

It made me sad.

It wasn’t my fault
But it still made me sad.

A couple of times since then
I thought about what he said.

I guess my hair
Isn’t so bad after all.


No matter the duration of a life, what matters most is its content. We should strive each day to give someone a compliment, because even baby steps will take us to the top of the tallest mountain. It may seem “Pollyanna” but enough complimentary love might just help us heal; ourselves and our world.
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Ashley Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Dear Vernon, the sentiments of your poem are so beautifully expressed. I especially admire the amazing after-thought in your last two lines, a grand finale to a brilliant piece and a great first post on PS. Your wonderful heart shines in your poetic lines and end note. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rigoler Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 8:56 PM
I agree with you. Complimenting others honestly is a great way to bond a friendship. I try my best at it. / Maurice
Mcconnell Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Fine penning Vernon, you tell such an important tale we call need to be doing. I've just written this week one on a similar vane called 'a pleading for kindness'. Hope all is well, take care, Gordon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:50 PM
A nice tribute! In your day be kind.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 12:33 PM
There is wisdom in what you say. So many people say nasty things. A compliment can go a long way.
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