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left in the ground

dark cemetaries someones end cast into stone death left in the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2009 1:03:00 PM
thank goodness they aren't there, nice haiku, and thanks, Jade Exit, for comments, jmg
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:04:00 PM
dark--but wonderfully done
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Date: 3/29/2009 8:17:00 AM
this is a nice write jade. welcome to the soup!and keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:27:00 PM
nice jade. chris ps.see you in class
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Date: 3/27/2009 1:39:00 PM
Hi Jade So nice to meet you hun! Truly enjoyed. We welcome you here with open hearts. Look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Take care Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 3/27/2009 12:35:00 PM
Interesting images carry your thoughts in this poem. You may want to change cemetarys to cemetaries. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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