Left In the Ground

dark cemetaries
someones end cast into stone
death left in the ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 1:03 PM
thank goodness they aren't there, nice haiku, and thanks, Jade Exit, for comments, jmg
Atanacio Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 12:04 PM
dark--but wonderfully done
Lopez Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 8:17 AM
this is a nice write jade. welcome to the soup!and keep up the good work!
Yarnell Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 2:27 PM
nice jade. chris ps.see you in class
Sheart Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 1:39 PM
Hi Jade So nice to meet you hun! Truly enjoyed. We welcome you here with open hearts. Look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Take care Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia
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March 27, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Interesting images carry your thoughts in this poem. You may want to change cemetarys to cemetaries. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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