Left Behind

fall kaleidoscope 
tragically beautiful
broken winged Robin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Anish Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 6:17 PM
Autumn is passing. Soon the "fall kalidoscope" will be but a memory. Very evocative poetry. Yours Matthew Anish
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November 14, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Good morning Robert..What beauty can do to the helpless... I'm not a robin... More like a sparrow .. Left behind, by choice... After my world collided... Love the image, deep... Wish i.could help the robin.. And fix the eclipse within...have a great day..Linda
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November 12, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative work..Sad to see a bird down and know what the end results usually is ...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 7:43 PM
HI, Robert. This poem is tragically beautiful!
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November 10, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Sorrow in the midst of beauty tugs at the heart. You always pull at the emotions and make me feel what you say. Lovely verse dear friend! :) So glad you liked the Pearl of Great Price, I had fun writing.
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November 10, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Aw, what a sad sight to see amidst the kaleidoscope of colorful leaves, Rob. Truly a heartfelt haiku! Love, Carolyn
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