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Left Behind

fall kaleidoscope tragically beautiful broken winged Robin

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Matthew Anish

Date: 11/17/2011 6:17:00 PM

Autumn is passing. Soon the "fall kalidoscope" will be but a memory. Very evocative poetry. Yours Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/14/2011 6:17:00 AM

Good morning Robert..What beauty can do to the helpless... I'm not a robin... More like a sparrow .. Left behind, by choice... After my world collided... Love the image, deep... Wish i.could help the robin.. And fix the eclipse within...have a great day..Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2011 1:42:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative work..Sad to see a bird down and know what the end results usually is ...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 7:43:00 PM

HI, Robert. This poem is tragically beautiful!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/10/2011 11:19:00 AM

Sorrow in the midst of beauty tugs at the heart. You always pull at the emotions and make me feel what you say. Lovely verse dear friend! :) So glad you liked the Pearl of Great Price, I had fun writing.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 9:33:00 AM

Aw, what a sad sight to see amidst the kaleidoscope of colorful leaves, Rob. Truly a heartfelt haiku! Love, Carolyn