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She Says farewell He looks into her eyes He does not see him anymore Not so long ago He was her whole world Now those eyes are still & cold They do not anymore hold Pleasant surprises to unfold The day was clear, Sun shinning bright Amongst the crowd He felt lonely, cold & dark inside His hands searched his chest Trying to hold his heart-from falling apart His fingers felt An empty boney cage Not even a faintest beat left He looked up, Sun shinning bright Clear blue sky Again his hand searched, his fingers felt The empty boney cage His heart stop beating As she left

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Date: 11/22/2010 6:10:00 AM
bit of both i guess. I never had any plans of writing poems, before I met a certain person.I write whatever comes to mind i write. i like it when it rhymes. Before i started writing i never use to read poetry , i listen to music always.
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:22:00 AM
Very apt form you have chosen to write on the betrayal or lost love, ashek
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:44:00 AM
thank you guys, thanks for reading. I wish I could give up everything and only write......King of Pain that could be a good pen name for me!LOL. Its not a good feeling ,hurting all the time .........
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:35:00 AM
A sad write on lost love...well done my friend...Michael
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