Leaving You

Leaving you was the easiest
or so I thought
lingering deep within my soul
devouring me
like the waves of an ocean
growing deeper and bigger
until it consumes me
consumes me like a tsunami
unable to stop
think, breath
unable to know
completely lost
helpless
was leaving you the easiest?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Liaw Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:40 PM
Lovely, descriptive metaphors.
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February 24, 2016 at 4:14 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Ashlyn - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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