Leaving Oklahoma

In a pile of leaves 
Made into a bed
Under a tree 
You lay down your head

To stare at the sky 
And dream of a day 
The river will flow
And take you away 

So gentle the stream 
So calm the air 
And muddy the water 
That takes you there

Stained are your clothes 
From the places you’ve been 
A constant reminder 
Of morals within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Interesting write in this one for it is descriptive and expressive...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Trevino Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 10:40 PM
ohh... good write here:)
Marie Wren Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 3:09 PM
this is really good micah you are very talented.
Pickett Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 6:33 AM
And I repeat!!--VERY WELL DONE.... A new fav friend.....Good work....:JP}
Nutter Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 3:07 AM
This poem is very well done. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. True words and so creatively expressed.
Smith Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 1:20 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Last night I was also enjoying stories from a bingo friend who grew up and lived in Oklahoma. Sounds like a nice place.
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