Leaving Me Behind

Here we are again, you having to pack
When I just got used to having you back
I hate you having to work so far
Wanting to see you doesn’t mean just getting in my car

Inside I shout “can’t you just stay?”
Wishing not another goodbye I have to say
But before I know it you’re on your way

“Passport? Ticket? Here to check in mate?”
“15 minute before you have to be through the boarding gate”
I hate it all and I’m trying to be fine
But every time it’s you going through, leaving me behind

Thousands of miles away
Me being here counting each day
Before I get to have you back
Then again just a while before you have to pack

Again that boarding gate
I absolutely hate
Standing there waving as you disappear in the crowd
Airport announcements oh so loud

Walking to the car
And it feels so far
Because I’m feeling alone
Knowing when I get there you won’t be home

I can’t wait to hear “Here to check in mates?”
“15 minutes before you guys have to be through the boarding gate”
Not having to stay across the line or say goodbye
Maybe then I’d love airports just fine
When you’re not leaving me behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/12/2014 5:02:00 AM
This one is really well written. Sad but poetic.
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:15:00 AM
:))) Thank you Maurice. What an amazing comment. I do appreciate the words of praise. Have a superb day "B"
Date: 11/5/2014 1:04:00 PM
B, I really really enjoyed this piece. It had emotion, heart, and feeling that was easily felt. I feel for you B. Hold on to the time you have. :) Waiting makes it all the more precious. <3 -TJ
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Date: 11/6/2014 2:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Trinity. Hugs "B"
Date: 11/5/2014 8:24:00 AM
Wow , I had to catch my breath ..... truly moving .... awesome .(7)
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem Brandon and for your lovely comment. Warm Regards "B"
Date: 11/5/2014 6:54:00 AM
Tenderness with a sense of abandonment B well structured lovely pen 7 ty for reading poets hugs
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Shadow :) Hugs "B"
Date: 11/4/2014 2:07:00 PM
Oh it seems like a hard experience to have to go through, repeatedly. Hope there is continual safe passage. Good write BE
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:32:00 PM
I am use to the distance thing, but the goodbyes is never easy. Thank you for your comment and kind wish Casarah. Hugs "B"
Date: 11/4/2014 10:29:00 AM
Very heard for someone to live continuously with the threat of separation and the agony of being alone! A very sensitive and true poem that touches the heart dear, B! Great work!
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much D :) SORTED MY PASSPORT OUT TODAY :) So one of these days I'd be going through the boarding gate too:) can go visit him.Thank you for taking the time to visit my page.Warm regards "B"
Date: 11/4/2014 7:58:00 AM
What a nice wirte, long distance relationships would be hard on a persons life. :) hugs and love eve
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve. It is hard and though I'm use to him working away, the heart still miss him so much, but I know it will all be worth it in the end.this is all just a part of the journey. Keep well. HUGS "B"
Date: 11/3/2014 4:41:00 AM
lovely piece "B", well done on great piece, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 11/3/2014 4:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon. Have a lovely and blessed day. Regards "B"
Date: 11/1/2014 11:14:00 AM
touching deeply sad bless you very beautifully painted piece dear friend
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Date: 11/1/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Liam. God bless you. Keep well "B"
Date: 10/31/2014 7:03:00 PM
A piece with the ring of reality and truth to it...emotionally touching and well done. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 11/1/2014 1:05:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment Leo :) Warm Regards "B"
Date: 10/31/2014 4:39:00 PM
awww B sorry to have this person feel this way. I havent felt this in a while but when I did the heart can only take so much.
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Date: 10/31/2014 4:52:00 PM
Hey Jasmine.thanks for your comment.i wrote this poem just to express the way I feel bout him leaving, but I believe that one day the travel will stop and we'll settle down at one place and I can get to live out my hand-picked by God poem. Maybe I'll board with soon :) Hugs "B"
Date: 10/31/2014 3:47:00 PM
oh long distance relationships must be so so hard and you portray this oh so well in this emotional write:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/31/2014 3:50:00 PM
One get use to it Jan, but it is sad and hard every time one have to say goodbye. Thanks for your comment. Big Hug "B"
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