Leaving April

LEAVING APRIL a break in the clouds leafy crowd rustles shadows rush blue jay darts in darts out point of concern

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/11/2012 11:54:00 AM

Like this - I just saw the first jay here is several years, so it is very timely.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/2/2012 9:15:00 AM

You are so huggable!! I think we're sharing another 'spider' moment here, Daver! I haven't been seeing so many jays lately...would make the other birds feel more calm and relaxed for sure. I think they go into the deep woods to nest, then come back in packs?:) Have a marvelous day! Love, Mikki

James Peranteau

Date: 5/2/2012 4:20:00 AM

Another great write dear poet ! I am definitely feeling a storm brewing in your last two Haiku's sir.....I have to try my hand at this form again. I haven't written one in some time. A pleasure reading you this a.m. Dave...have a great one....much love, james

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2012 1:40:00 PM

Welcome May!!! - Well doen Daver! - oxox Anne-Lise

David Williams

Date: 5/1/2012 9:21:00 AM

Daver good haiku's..David