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Leaving April

LEAVING APRIL

a break in the clouds
            leafy crowd rustles
       shadows rush

blue jay darts in
      darts out
         point of concern

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Joann Grisetti

May 11, 2012 at 11:54 AM

Like this - I just saw the first jay here is several years, so it is very timely.

Michelle Mac Donald

May 2, 2012 at 9:15 AM

You are so huggable!! I think we're sharing another 'spider' moment here, Daver! I haven't been seeing so many jays lately...would make the other birds feel more calm and relaxed for sure. I think they go into the deep woods to nest, then come back in packs?:) Have a marvelous day! Love, Mikki

James Peranteau

May 2, 2012 at 4:20 AM

Another great write dear poet ! I am definitely feeling a storm brewing in your last two Haiku's sir.....I have to try my hand at this form again. I haven't written one in some time. A pleasure reading you this a.m. Dave...have a great one....much love, james