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Leaving All Behind

It's not that I am helpless I just can't help myself, and as your memories call I answer, and teardrops fall. But a dream or two ago we'd trade a kiss hello, a greeting of two lovers with a new life to uncover. In sorrow that we fell apart my heart fumbles in the dark in an ever-changing world with all of life a-whirl. Missing what was meant to be and stug'ling with what I now see; I see we're both be-leavers. . . . . .leaving all behind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/20/2012 2:45:00 PM
Isn't it so true that the leaving is so hard. You tell the story in a way that touches the heart Chuck. So nice, and I enjoyed. Lizzie
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Date: 4/14/2012 10:37:00 PM
Chuck, nice to see we can accept our faults. This has it's moments... and hope all dreams meet again... one can only hold back so much, emotions over power everything... helping us make hurtful decisions... enjoyed..pd
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Date: 4/14/2012 1:06:00 PM
Very poignant and touching - always a pleasure reading your work. Have a nice week! :-) Always ~Laura
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:55:00 AM
sad but very touching. i love the "be-leavers" - so clever!
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:43:00 PM
Such a touching write, Chuck, and beautifully penned! I enjoyed reading it tonight, though my heart did break a little. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:24:00 PM
very moving...
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