Leaving

A sanitys plea, 
with hushed secrets, 
becomes desired, 
in the eyes of time. 

The sands melting, 
as the hour glass screams, 
to empty the confusion, 
within ones very own, 
deep, dark dreams. 

And then it happens, 
as the breath of dryness, 
shakes and trembles, 
in a shyness type way, 
you say good-bye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Justin CHooooIWWWce! Nice Work. Real cool! I'm feeling this poetry! ~JS Lambert
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