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Leaving

cut my wrists
burn my thighs
tab my heart
and hope to die

i hate my life
sufficate tonight
grab my knife
lets end this right

dont wanna go
but have to leave
cant stand my life
just let me bleed

i do not know?

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Colleen Bono

November 30, 2009 at 12:52 PM

Well I did what it said.I already read this one but was worth reading again.You have soup mail.

Colleen Bono

November 29, 2009 at 12:42 PM

wow,I thought some of mine where dark but this one tops it.It is my way of thinking most of the time.Read my poem Today is the Day.It is a little more positive.

P P

November 28, 2009 at 9:06 AM

poetry rachel good ok'

Simone Segal

November 25, 2009 at 9:56 AM

Rachel, you have the power in you to put as much thought into changing the way you think, please read my poem, Brim Your Minds Cup, I know you can turn your life around,Please believe what you read, your whole world will change if you do I promise you, love Simone

Jared Pickett

November 25, 2009 at 9:47 AM

These poems are so dark and disturbing... These are scary feelings that really don't inspire... Sweetie every poem I have read seems to be a cry for help....It sucks that you feel this way about yourself.... Life is to short and precious to want death....I hope these suicidal thoughts disappear, because it is not the answer.........I hope you find inspiration somewhere before it is too late......:JP]

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