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Leaving

cut my wrists burn my thighs tab my heart and hope to die i hate my life sufficate tonight grab my knife lets end this right dont wanna go but have to leave cant stand my life just let me bleed

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Colleen Bono

Date: 11/30/2009 12:52:00 PM

Well I did what it said.I already read this one but was worth reading again.You have soup mail.

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/29/2009 12:42:00 PM

wow,I thought some of mine where dark but this one tops it.It is my way of thinking most of the time.Read my poem Today is the Day.It is a little more positive.

P P

Date: 11/28/2009 9:06:00 AM

poetry rachel good ok'

Simone Segal

Date: 11/25/2009 9:56:00 AM

Rachel, you have the power in you to put as much thought into changing the way you think, please read my poem, Brim Your Minds Cup, I know you can turn your life around,Please believe what you read, your whole world will change if you do I promise you, love Simone

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/25/2009 9:47:00 AM

These poems are so dark and disturbing... These are scary feelings that really don't inspire... Sweetie every poem I have read seems to be a cry for help....It sucks that you feel this way about yourself.... Life is to short and precious to want death....I hope these suicidal thoughts disappear, because it is not the answer.........I hope you find inspiration somewhere before it is too late......:JP]