Leaves Tease, This Reality

hibernating are the deep, those dark emotions of the heart - pulling thoughts apart, eyes are closed tightly, will light break through? (life) it strives to awaken the senses, of my reality - breathe in, before moments cover or try to smother me . . because leaves love to tease, this reality
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~ depth invades light, as light seeks a way of escape ~ Author's Note~ Darkness doesn't mold me and could never hold me. Sometimes, the muse dives into the deep side.
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Date: 5/24/2023 4:04:00 PM
Moments of the heart where dark thoughts may linger, but the light always breaks through
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/25/2023 7:01:00 PM
Exactly ! Light can be found, even in a heart filled with darkness. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 11/2/2018 12:57:00 PM
Captivating words - agreed sometimes flirting with the dark side can gain new perspective that can lead the way back to the light of the Carpe Diem path :)
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Date: 11/2/2018 3:02:00 PM
I love the way you encourage with kindness. Being new to the world of poetry I tend to let all my emotions fly yet to your point adding a filter and not showing some on paper is a good thing. Thanks again
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/2/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thank you. And I don't linger in darkness, but sometimes the muse insists. :) So, I follow her lead. It is good to let all emotions free. Even if you don't place them upon the page, for all to see. I appreciate your kindness. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/1/2018 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here; muses are deep philosophers. Well done.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank M.L. And you are right, the muse like to dive into deep darkness. Sometimes. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 9/4/2018 10:20:00 PM
Dancing in the dark & deep...soon our eyes begin to weep...welcome to the dark side...'I'm am not your father, Luke' lol...now that's more like it lol...great deep write Brandy...light & dark...^WW^
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/5/2018 12:44:00 PM
"I'm am not your father, Luke" Softly giggling. :) I love this thought. Thank you Winged Warrior. Such an amazing comment. The deep dark side of me lingers. Sometimes I let these thoughts touch the wind. ~ Brandy
Date: 9/3/2018 6:42:00 PM
May the darkness continue to hibernate deep within the recesses of your soul and the light of love shine brightly from your heart. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thank you John. :) The light seems to linger in my presence. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 9/3/2018 4:58:00 PM
Light indeed breaks through in your words..and awakens the senses..well done, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. You see the light within, even though these words hold a bit of darkness. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
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