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Leaves Ruffled

...Autumn leaves ruffled
by the secrets transmitted
through the howling wind...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2010 11:55:00 PM

I like the second line,, i picture someone standing there lol with leaves just passing by holding the secrets, enjoyed..P.D.

Raj Nandy

Date: 8/23/2010 9:19:00 PM

Great imagery and poetic expression Wilma ! Thanks for your comments on my 'Tapestry for the Lord '. - Raj

Kris Walters

Date: 8/23/2010 6:07:00 PM

Wonderful feeling to this- secrets on the wind! Beautiful Haiku! Hugs, Kris

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 8/23/2010 1:05:00 PM

That second line has an otherworldly aspect to it. If you read this, it almost seems to have a supernatural tint to it, doesn't it? Thanks as always, Gerard

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/22/2010 11:20:00 PM

Awesome Haiku, Wilma! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/22/2010 2:42:00 PM

Wilma my friend.. Its Monday here already... two a.m... we will be leaving probably Wednesday so I can fly from here to Mississippi to see my son in hospital there... he is flying from Iraq to Miss. hospital ... Ron will be flying to Pittsburgh to conduct his business activities... then drive to New Jersey and wait for me to fly back from Mississippi.. wow.. thats a lot of traveling..luv.. nite..nite... ciao...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/22/2010 10:30:00 AM

I love your Haiku !!! my fav. time also... glad you like "warm thoughts" have to keep you happy love....always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 10:25:00 AM

oooooh, I LIKE this!!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/22/2010 6:33:00 AM

Excellent write, Wilma. Great job. Thanks for your kind words. xxxRalph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2010 7:45:00 PM

Nice images conveying a transition thought.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/21/2010 7:10:00 PM

I can smell Autum right now. mmmmm, oh it me under arms. sorry hehe!! great poem Girl friend

James Peranteau

Date: 8/21/2010 6:39:00 PM

Great Haiku here Wilma ! Thought provoking as well, really good poem ! james

Skat A

Date: 8/21/2010 6:21:00 PM

Nice haiku Wilma, loved the mystery of change*luv~SKAT

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/21/2010 5:48:00 PM

Nice haiku here. You went by the 5-7-5 form. Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2010 2:42:00 PM

Luv those secrets Wilma.. none of mine though..today is the day..luv.. hope all will be there in spirit with me and Ron.. and thankxxx for all your great contest entries and comments today.. and letting me know about my list being posted... appreciate.. OK..then ..here comes the bride..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/21/2010 12:21:00 PM

How I long for the days when I lived up north and leaves turned bright colors before ruffling their secrets through howling wind. No leaves fall from palm trees and most of the plants where I live now keep their leaves year-round. Your haiku takes me back to my youth in New Jersey, Wilma. Very beautifully written! I'll be okay, dear, just doctorphobic. I am going to church this evening and that always lifts my spirits and brings serenity. Thanks for your friendship. Love, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/21/2010 11:40:00 AM

where are you north canida?

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