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leaves catch sky water

leaves catch sky water buckles with too much weight-- rain drops d r i p

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/24/2012 7:53:00 AM
This is actually... brilliant- How would I live without you? It's only to be told...here's some love and a hug ;>}
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Date: 10/31/2011 1:38:00 PM
I'm just about getting the hang of haiku - remembered loving this one and wanted to read it again. Hope you're well, Nikko : )
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Date: 7/20/2011 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win! great piece!!!! and Great write ... always Michael hugs your way!!!
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:59:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win , nikko
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:47:00 AM
This is so cool! Many congratulations, Nikko : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations Missy ;) I enjoyed laying my eyes on this one again *mwahugs*
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:33:00 AM
Congrats Nikko. A great piece. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:19:00 AM
congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:46:00 PM
Great poem and visual. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:33:00 PM
Congrats sweet friend Nikko on a big first place win with thise captivating leaves..luv..enjoy...
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Date: 7/18/2011 12:55:00 PM
you really captured the moment here and I love the ending dripping away. it's awesome! btw, thanks for letting me know about that sneaky k :)
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Date: 7/11/2011 5:24:00 PM
It's been a long time N.N.,, I'm not calling u that nicknack name... Lol... A swell write.. but ouch it hurts... I have a secret LOL- and gosh it involves u.. who can I tell? Who can i tell? I wanna gossip! Well 2 secrets really.. glad to be back... Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 7/7/2011 8:42:00 AM
Very descriptive..I can just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:08:00 PM
Clever and refreshing. LOve, daver
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:00:00 AM
Good grief, NIkko, I just realized this is YOU. Is this the one for john? Let me go and see the other one again.
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Date: 7/3/2011 11:53:00 PM
I like the image shown by the last word. Love that first line!
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Date: 7/1/2011 11:04:00 AM
congrats on the win!! enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:32:00 AM
Hi nikko, had gone on a sabbatical..you have a nice haiku here,loved it. captured nature's sheer beauty so well. And you're absolutely right I happen to be a female:))..God! how did I ever sound like a man to Chris!! Good luck for this, a sure winning piece and love to you, gautami
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Date: 6/30/2011 9:23:00 AM
lovely visual sweet friend Nikko.. good luck in the contest.. luv those rain drops .. oh..
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:22:00 AM
Hi Nikko Very artistic presentation of your Haiku. Your verse is portraying an overload... I have just learned how to center my poems from my children. They think I am funny! Hope your headaches resolves with chocolates and sugared water (soda). Have a nice weekend dear. Dalila
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:04:00 AM
oohah, a surefire trophy for chris' gig, if ever, nikks... brilliant!..tag-ulan na! miss you on my pages...:)huggs, nette
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:00:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Nikko. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. The best to you if this is for a contest my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:50:00 PM
Very thoughtful and unique expressions very creative, nikko
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:32:00 AM
This is Brilliant Nikko.Very creative write.Now how did you write drip that way here?Copy and paste?I am asking it because once I tried this in a poem(rippling stream) but failed.Pl.reply.
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