Leaves Catch Sky Water

leaves catch sky water
    buckles with too much weight--
          rain drops
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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White Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 7:53 AM
This is actually... brilliant- How would I live without you? It's only to be told...here's some love and a hug ;>}
Horne Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 1:38 PM
I'm just about getting the hang of haiku - remembered loving this one and wanted to read it again. Hope you're well, Nikko : )
Falotico Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Congrats on your win! great piece!!!! and Great write ... always Michael hugs your way!!!
Mehta Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 1:59 PM
My congratulations on the first place win , nikko
Horne Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 11:47 AM
This is so cool! Many congratulations, Nikko : )
Neels Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations Missy ;) I enjoyed laying my eyes on this one again *mwahugs*
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
Mantle Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 1:33 AM
Congrats Nikko. A great piece. Best wishes Em :)
Williams Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 12:19 AM
congrats on your win, David
Quigley Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Great poem and visual. Congratulations on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Congrats sweet friend Nikko on a big first place win with thise captivating leaves..luv..enjoy...
Susan Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 12:55 PM
you really captured the moment here and I love the ending dripping away. it's awesome! btw, thanks for letting me know about that sneaky k :)
A   Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 5:24 PM
It's been a long time N.N.,, I'm not calling u that nicknack name... Lol... A swell write.. but ouch it hurts... I have a secret LOL- and gosh it involves u.. who can I tell? Who can i tell? I wanna gossip! Well 2 secrets really.. glad to be back... Take care,..p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Very descriptive..I can just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Austin Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Clever and refreshing. LOve, daver
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good grief, NIkko, I just realized this is YOU. Is this the one for john? Let me go and see the other one again.
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 11:53 PM
I like the image shown by the last word. Love that first line!
Culverhouse Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 11:04 AM
congrats on the win!! enjoyed reading today!
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June 30, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Hi nikko, had gone on a sabbatical..you have a nice haiku here,loved it. captured nature's sheer beauty so well. And you're absolutely right I happen to be a female:))..God! how did I ever sound like a man to Chris!! Good luck for this, a sure winning piece and love to you, gautami
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 9:23 AM
lovely visual sweet friend Nikko.. good luck in the contest.. luv those rain drops .. oh..
Agtani Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 12:22 AM
Hi Nikko Very artistic presentation of your Haiku. Your verse is portraying an overload... I have just learned how to center my poems from my children. They think I am funny! Hope your headaches resolves with chocolates and sugared water (soda). Have a nice weekend dear. Dalila
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June 30, 2011 at 12:04 AM
oohah, a surefire trophy for chris' gig, if ever, nikks... brilliant!..tag-ulan na! miss you on my pages...:)huggs, nette
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 1:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Nikko. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. The best to you if this is for a contest my friend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Very thoughtful and unique expressions very creative, nikko
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 10:32 AM
This is Brilliant Nikko.Very creative write.Now how did you write drip that way here?Copy and paste?I am asking it because once I tried this in a poem(rippling stream) but failed.Pl.reply.
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