Leaves Begin To Shudder

A bum called Boe has stubbed his toe, he’s stumbled in the gutter;
with broken neck, he looks a wreck, the sparrows all aflutter.

The passers-by, they close an eye, and turn their heads to mutter:
“Let’s pray for rains to cleanse the lanes, to rid the road of clutter.”	

A river slows neath mountain snows, and leaves begin to shudder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:35 PM
Another great poem Terry. Will I ever get to read them all? I hope so. You need to get your awesome poems in a book.
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:34 PM
I like it..the leaves show more sensitivity than the humans! I believe it too! Light & love
Collins Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Terry - You pack so much horrid truth into such matter-of-fact rhyme. Reminds me of Edward Arlington Robinson. love, Kathy
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 10:00 PM
wow, I read this one a second time. It's actually quite profound to me!
Wesley Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Doesn't get better than this. I think it is brilliant!
Gooden Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 7:07 AM
Good work Terry: excellent rhyming, the imagery works perfectly and the message resounds.
Burch Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 8:10 PM
Breath-taking, Terry...this is an awsome write!!! You say sooo much in this, Well Done...its a fav...huggs...love ya , deb
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 7:35 PM
The last line summed it all.Very good poem capturing a moment.Enjoyed reading it.
Bauer Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 7:00 PM
a wonderful use of rhyme to tell a sad and very poignant tale. bravo!
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