"leaves and Lies"

Leaves like words fall soft
to the ground like little lies
that get past to see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:16 PM
wow, profound one here. I like it very much, and goodnight to you now!!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Truth in every line W.K. and an amazing intro line and title .. enjoyed your Haiku.. with luv..
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July 16, 2010 at 5:12 AM
A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Michael. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Nice haiku with apt images befitting the the thought
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July 15, 2010 at 5:54 PM
So much truth in your words. Good message in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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July 15, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Very thought-provoking haiku, Michael. Like the analogy -- quite clever! Love, Carolyn
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