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Leaves and Cherry Blossoms

Leaves scatter softly like waves on the open sea they make me happy The cherry blossoms falling like cotton bounty I gaze with much joy

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Date: 12/2/2012 11:28:00 AM

My friend, this is a free flowing well written haiku. It's great to read one like this. Some of mine seem awkward.... Well done..... Jake

Elenushka Toledo
Date: 12/2/2012 11:49:00 AM

Thank you my friend John. I will read you too?

Date: 11/30/2012 5:31:00 PM

Elenushka, really a great read with these Haikus. Rollo

Elenushka Toledo
Date: 12/2/2012 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Rollo. I will read you. ?

Date: 11/30/2012 5:01:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Elenushka !!!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Elenushka Toledo
Date: 11/30/2012 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Anne, I want to focus in writing positive poems. I have a tendency to write dark poems. But I love Haiku.?