Leaves and Cherry Blossoms

Leaves scatter softly 
like waves on the open sea
they make me happy


The cherry blossoms
falling like cotton bounty
I gaze with much joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Posey Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 11:28 AM
My friend, this is a free flowing well written haiku. It's great to read one like this. Some of mine seem awkward.... Well done..... Jake
Toledo Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Thank you my friend John. I will read you too?
West Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Elenushka, really a great read with these Haikus. Rollo
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December 2, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Thank you Rollo. I will read you. ?
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Lovely haiku, Elenushka !!!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Toledo Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Anne, I want to focus in writing positive poems. I have a tendency to write dark poems. But I love Haiku.?
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