Leaves

swaying through the winds
                          stayed strong against any storm
                               'till it slowly fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Logan Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Good precept fairly well completed. line one present tense, lines two and three past tense. swaying through the winds stays strong against all storms 'till it slowly falls.
Templo Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:54 PM
:-)
Logan Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:54 AM
As the last line should mention something to do with nature, maybe that should be 'till leaf slowly falls.
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