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Leaves

swaying through the winds stayed strong against any storm 'till it slowly fall.

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Date: 9/21/2016 3:51:00 AM
Good precept fairly well completed. line one present tense, lines two and three past tense. swaying through the winds stays strong against all storms 'till it slowly falls.
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Welvin Templo
Date: 9/22/2016 9:54:00 PM
:-)
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/21/2016 3:54:00 AM
As the last line should mention something to do with nature, maybe that should be 'till leaf slowly falls.

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