Leaves

Old Way Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves Rake rake rake rake rake rake rake Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves!!!! New Way Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves. Blow blow blow blow blow blow blow. Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves!!!!

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Walter Tomeo

Date: 9/9/2011 1:17:00 AM

Thanks Marty for your kind words to me and for welcoming to PS. I am reading some of your wonderful poems and they are GREAT! Thumbs up!!!!

Robyn Blauw

Date: 1/5/2011 12:53:00 PM

Very cleverly written. I enjoyed this one. Take care

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2010 9:43:00 AM

Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Marty. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/5/2010 7:11:00 AM

You had me laughing out loud, Marty! Very funny. Enjoyed, thank you! (When I try the "new way," the leaves just scatter all over the place and I pick up the rake again.) Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/3/2010 4:36:00 PM

Hi Marty. just thought I'd check up on you. Haven't seen you on for a while now i KNOW what you've been up to. reminds me of the bells bells bells bells bells bells from Mr' POE.

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/29/2010 3:44:00 PM

Hey Marty! Good to see you...come and find joy in what you love to do! And about the leaves? They're only seem to be good for two things, composte and providing forced-exercise! Always, Audrey

Steven Mossburg

Date: 10/29/2010 3:33:00 PM

you made me chuckle. Thanks for sharing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2010 12:49:00 PM

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Marty. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/29/2010 12:45:00 PM

Hi Marty,so good to see your beautiful work again,i'm so happy. .beautiful leaves haiku. .today i was thinking of a leaf haiku,then i did a rain one.Hope you arè fine .