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Leaves

Old Way

Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves
Rake rake rake rake rake rake rake
Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves!!!!

New Way

Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves.
Blow blow blow blow blow blow blow.
Leaves leaves leaves leaves leaves!!!!

Copyright © Marty Owens | Year Posted 2010

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Walter Tomeo Date: 9/9/2011 1:17:00 AM Thanks Marty for your kind words to me and for welcoming to PS. I am reading some of your wonderful poems and they are GREAT! Thumbs up!!!! Login to Reply

Robyn Blauw Date: 1/5/2011 12:53:00 PM Very cleverly written. I enjoyed this one. Take care Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/6/2010 9:43:00 AM Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Marty. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/5/2010 7:11:00 AM You had me laughing out loud, Marty! Very funny. Enjoyed, thank you! (When I try the "new way," the leaves just scatter all over the place and I pick up the rake again.) Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 11/3/2010 4:36:00 PM Hi Marty. just thought I'd check up on you. Haven't seen you on for a while now i KNOW what you've been up to. reminds me of the bells bells bells bells bells bells from Mr' POE. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 10/29/2010 3:44:00 PM Hey Marty! Good to see you...come and find joy in what you love to do! And about the leaves? They're only seem to be good for two things, composte and providing forced-exercise! Always, Audrey Login to Reply

Steven Mossburg Date: 10/29/2010 3:33:00 PM you made me chuckle. Thanks for sharing Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/29/2010 12:49:00 PM Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Marty. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 10/29/2010 12:45:00 PM Hi Marty,so good to see your beautiful work again,i'm so happy. .beautiful leaves haiku. .today i was thinking of a leaf haiku,then i did a rain one.Hope you arè fine . Login to Reply