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Leave You My Tears

Though painful to leave you behind Forever I leave you my tears True resting place I seek to find Though painful to leave you behind For when death will come we are blind A guest that removes all our fears Though painful to leave you behind Forever I leave you my tears . *Sad 11-9-2014

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Date: 12/29/2014 11:19:00 AM
Great choice for Best 2014 poem. Congratulations on your win. I remember this sad yet beautiful Triolet.
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:01:00 PM
OLUSEGUN, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/19/2014 9:03:00 AM
Way to go..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 12/18/2014 11:19:00 AM
Wow great one Olusegun! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 12/18/2014 7:24:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win. You made a great choice with this stunning triolet.
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Date: 12/18/2014 1:35:00 AM
Very touchy and heartfelt write, congratulations on the win
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Date: 12/17/2014 12:59:00 PM
many congrats again:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2014 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations.... Love Linda
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Date: 9/25/2014 3:25:00 AM
Wonderfully done triolet Olusegun ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/24/2014 7:49:00 PM
Excellent! I had to spend time studying this style and reading and re-reading your wonderful poem. Great job, great win, CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
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Date: 9/24/2014 5:04:00 PM
This is a great example of triolet. Freddie loves this form so you chose your submission very wisely. BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/24/2014 4:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win....cheers
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Date: 9/24/2014 10:35:00 AM
Beautiful Triolet Olusegun. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/24/2014 5:00:00 AM
wonderful touching triolet, many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:16:00 PM
Olusegun, a great triolet, with touching words. Sometimes, that's all we can leave. Enjoyed..Linda
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