Leave You My Tears

Though painful to leave you behind
Forever I leave you my tears
True resting place I seek to find
Though painful to leave you behind
For when death will come we are blind
A guest that removes all our fears
Though painful to leave you behind
Forever I leave you my tears .



*Sad
11-9-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Great choice for Best 2014 poem. Congratulations on your win. I remember this sad yet beautiful Triolet.
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 10:01 PM
OLUSEGUN, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 9:03 AM
Way to go..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Wow great one Olusegun! Congrats on top win!
Yvonne Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win. You made a great choice with this stunning triolet.
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Very touchy and heartfelt write, congratulations on the win
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 12:59 PM
many congrats again:-) Hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations.... Love Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 3:25 AM
Wonderfully done triolet Olusegun ! Congrats on huge win!
Yvonne Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Excellent! I had to spend time studying this style and reading and re-reading your wonderful poem. Great job, great win, CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:04 PM
This is a great example of triolet. Freddie loves this form so you chose your submission very wisely. BIG congrats on your win.
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Congrats on the win....cheers
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Beautiful Triolet Olusegun. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:00 AM
wonderful touching triolet, many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Olusegun, a great triolet, with touching words. Sometimes, that's all we can leave. Enjoyed..Linda
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