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Leave me asleep

let me sleep, sleep, wake me not yet, let me dream, dream on for a while, the day is done, evening is set, deep in repose I sport a smile. Time rests uneasy on my brow, smile on my face is thought of you, my breath moves slowly to and fro, let me dream this dream to be true! peace resides near beat of my heart, tranquil is mind, as is surround, dreams journey to that hallowed spot, serenity greets, love abounds. a world of divisions, of pain, in which we live counting our days, dream is all where our love remains, leave me dreaming, in sleep I stay. 13/11/2022 8 syllables each line 4 quatrains with abab rhyme sequence

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Date: 11/13/2022 9:47:00 AM
Great verse very soothing feelings. The world is divided, a shame . Blessing my friend
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/13/2022 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Eve! Lovely to hear from you! The world is in turmoil and needs another messiah to guide us! Not Elon Musk!!