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Leave Me Alone

Staring ahead at the breeze rippled water His gaze didn’t wander at all He failed to acknowledge my footsteps approaching Just gazed at that ebony pool I had to enquire about his well-being And was he in need of a hand He muttered that he was about to go in For now though he’d stay on dry land I’d like to help, I said, please tell me how I can get you away from the edge Just leave me alone, I’m perfectly fine He told me, ‘She’s just by that hedge’ I followed his gaze and I was amazed I suddenly shared the man’s wish He leapt in the water and swam really quick To grab his rod back from the fish The rod bent right over, the fish tried to dive That huge fish I’ll never forget The man shouted don’t you dare leave me alone Just Wade out and bring me that net 12 November 2021 Contest: Leave Me Alone Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 11/16/2021 9:19:00 PM
Great narration of a long story in short. Beautifully done explain the concept of leaving alone. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:47:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle at the end. God bless you.
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/16/2021 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Beata. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 11/13/2021 7:07:00 PM
I read the title, Terry. I hope things aren't too awful. Just how much money would you like me to leave you in my will? And would you like Monopoly Money or 'Coupons' from pre-independence Ukraine? ... Actually, I have a $0.79 credit with Western Union that I can leave you. How about that?! Laughter forever, unto the death! :) gw
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/14/2021 1:01:00 AM
Don’t wanna be greedy, Gershon. Just transfer me a couple of those bitcoins I hear you’ve been hoarding. ;-) Terry
Date: 11/12/2021 10:05:00 PM
Hi Terry ……I like this poem….it had me thinking “oh this poor man” to making me smile !! Well done. Debx
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Date: 11/13/2021 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, Deb. Being a lifelong fisherman, I’ve lost count of the number of rods I’ve seen pulled in by fish, only to then be towed around the lake by the fish concerned. And I’ve seen almost as many fisherman dive in to retrieve their rod. Terry

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