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Devilish are the flames you breath into my bleeding heart- leave me in peace! 






11.10.2016


Silent One's Contest
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Babcock Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Nice one liner Anne Lise. love phyl
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October 22, 2016 at 12:55 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Congratulations on your win with this pain filled one liner, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 7:48 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congrats, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:45 PM
It's a truth of the world, yes devil exists for real. Small line but very huge meaning. Nicely done.
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 3:51 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Augustus :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 1:23 PM
It seems like that sometimes in love situations..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 3:51 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Congrats on this one, Sunshine. It's a dramatic one!
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 12:34 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congrats, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Oh Anne-Lise, sadly beautiful ...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 12:03 PM
- Laura, thanks for the nice visit and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 1:34 PM
A 7 for this emotional one-liner! Janice
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 2:02 PM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and your comments, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Back to congratulate you my dear. hugs// Charlie
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 2:01 PM
- Thanks for coming back with congrats, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 12:19 PM
This is not only sad, but it is also enveloped in pain, Anne-Lise! An excellent one-liner and worthy of a fine win...congratulations! Hugs // paul
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October 12, 2016 at 12:36 PM
- Paul, thanks for the nice words and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Docherty Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:18 AM
ooo I like that one, these are very good answers... well done
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:43 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Anna-Marie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Intensely sad A/L best wishes in the contest...Charlie
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 8:07 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Great one liner Anne Lise!:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 7:41 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 7:35 AM
You girls always go for those bad boys. Shame on you Anne Lise. Very sad AL, and such a beautiful heart it is:)
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 7:39 AM
- ........ simply imagination, no "bad boy" for me Daniel :) - Thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Anne-Lise, a wonderful line. Flames can burn but they can also sometimes stop the bleeding.
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October 12, 2016 at 7:07 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 12, 2016 at 3:25 AM
I totally agree with Victor, very well expressed. My best wishes, Afzal.
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October 12, 2016 at 6:24 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Afzal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 11, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Wow, this is so very intense and powerful Anne-Lise. So very glad I stopped by for this one-liner poem. Good luck in contest, sure reads like a winner to me. Don't think I could ever write something like this. I'm more a lover not a fighter. A 7 also.
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October 12, 2016 at 3:14 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Sherri - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, i find it very hard to write one liners. As always, you come out with a one liner and the emotions are there as always. I hope it does well in the contest Anne-Lise. A definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 3:13 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Mike - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Well done. Beneath the sadness I also sense anger.
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 3:13 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Agnes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 4:20 PM
excellent one-liner, anne lise! good luck in the contest...
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 3:12 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Ilene - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 2:08 PM
I dated this guy! You tell him, Sunshine! Well done ... CayCay
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October 12, 2016 at 3:12 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, CayCay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 11, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Another precious pearl dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs and a soupmail!
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October 12, 2016 at 3:11 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Beautifully sad A-L
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October 12, 2016 at 3:11 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 11, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Oh Please no.
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October 12, 2016 at 3:10 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Rajat - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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