Aurore Severo Poet I do not know?

Leave Me

  Leave me

You complain
I am too slow
I am too fast
Too dumb
Too many shoes

You liked my legs well enough
Before you tasted the fruit
You had sweet words
Now you speak with sour grapes
If I was male, I’d nail you to a stake

Choosing you
My life’s mistake

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Paul Callus May 9, 2016 at 4:11 PM I'm not complaining...I'm not paying for the shoes:) ...and you are no dumb blonde:) Joking apart, this is a delightful poem, and you are right to have a go at him! I love that 2nd stanza! ~ Regards /x/ paul Aurore Severo May 24, 2016 at 11:45 PM If you can laugh at life you have love, you dear sir are very kind :) xoxoxoxo

Connie Marcum Wong May 6, 2016 at 12:55 AM BTDT! Eve may have used these words after eating from the tree. I love it! ; ) Aurore Severo May 24, 2016 at 11:43 PM Very sweet thank you from heart, xoxoxo peace and love