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wrote this one in the hospital when I was admitted because of 'aneurysm-false-alarm-
thing'.

Lying on my bed in the heart of the dark,
Listening to the croaking frogs and dogs' bark,
Lulled by the crickets and the mystic rain,
And the rumbling thunder and the flashes of pain.
Down the unknown road I fell asleep,
Knowing and hoping this pain would leave,
But all in vain I waited and wept,
The pain however never left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/2/2011 12:45:00 PM
Oo nga po ate jan. . I had to stay sa hospital for quite some time. .kasi po ung mga symptoms katulad tlaga nung aneurysm..luckily vascualr migraine lang. . medjo boring po kasi sa hospital kaya I was able to make this one. .wala kasing magawa.. Anyway, opo sumali po ako.;)
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:37:00 AM
Buti naman po false alarm lang ang aneurysm,..but because of it you were able to make such a wonderful poem. hope it never happens again, though! Nga pla, do you join the contests here? There really fun
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