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will love be kind another time, or will you run away, the hurting tears do strike one blind, have passion if i may, or forgotten, cast away, when fortune goes astray, begone oh hurting day.... 'Departure' p.d. Don

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/26/2012 9:58:00 PM

Fortunes always go astray, but we survive to love another day. A wonderful poem where you impart the passions hidden within your heart.

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/8/2012 3:26:00 AM

The heart cannot be silent...lovely! Cynthia

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/8/2012 1:53:00 AM

nice poem Don...thanks for sharing..have a blessed day!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/7/2012 11:23:00 PM

wonderfully penned piece Don

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 9/7/2012 10:22:00 PM

but that's how love is.. left or right you'll never know which side will be a pleasant sight. enjoyed your poem

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/7/2012 10:08:00 PM

And may you sashay with the best of them my friend! You have written an incredible write here! What a glorious poem, full of intrigue and interest! You have brought to me a great feeling of loneliness with this write Don! What a really enjoyable poem you have here, superior piece, Great Work!!